Showing posts with label proofreading. Show all posts
Showing posts with label proofreading. Show all posts

November 14, 2012

An actor's guide to writing; or, Don't flub your lines when there's an audience in the house


I love to perform in local community theatre productions. It can be a lot of work -- one director referred to community theatre as "a part-time job that costs you money," and that sums it up rather well -- but I find it to be energizing as well as an outlet. Theatre is good for giving my brain something fun and non-scholarly to do, a nice break from school and work.

But recently, of course, I managed to make a connection between acting and interdisciplinary writing. Isn't the interdisciplinary mind a wondrous thing? It so often finds the overlap, the interplay, the synchronicity between seemingly disparate fields -- whether you want it to or not.


Don't flub your lines!


The striking commonality between acting and writing lies in the importance of getting your lines right -- that is, of saying exactly what you mean, at exactly the right time. The tricky part is noticing when you have failed to do this and taking steps to correct the error. Your job, and mine, is to say exactly what we mean to say, clearly and unambiguously, so that everyone in the audience can understand it.

If I skip lines in performance, I may be leaving out information critical to understanding the play. This is a Very Bad Thing to do, since I cannot assume that everyone (or even anyone) in my audience is already familiar with the story. The same applies to academic writing: you cannot assume that all of your readers will be familiar with the background information that feeds into your paper.

via the wonderful Wondermark 

This holds true even for disciplinary writing, although to a lesser extent. The strongest academic writing in all fields is that which can stand alone, and remains comprehensible to readers from outside the discipline.


Words, words, words


In a similar vein, use of the wrong word may change the entire meaning of a sentence, a scene, the whole play. This past October, during a performance of an Agatha Christie murder mystery, I asked another character, "Is it so wrong to kill the person who has taken everything you had in the world from you?" The other character, a canon (or English clergyman), is meant to reply "Yes!" In one particular performance, he instead bellowed "NO!" In other words, with one tiny slip of the tongue, a priest gave me permission to commit murder. While that defense may not hold up in court, it put an interesting spin on the story. He didn't even realize he had gotten it backward until I teased him about it later. After all, he knew what he intended to say.


This is a common problem for writers in the age of spellcheckers and autocorrection. If you make a typo, your computer's autocorrect function may correct it for you -- but it may not "correct" it to the word you intended to use. If you make a typo that is still a word, but not the word you intended, or if you make an incorrect word choice, your computer will not catch it for you. In all likelihood, when you read back over what you've written, you will read not what is actually on the page, but what you meant to put on the page.

This is where writing benefits from either a second set of eyes, or from resting for a while before you proofread. If your deadline is looming and you can't manage either of these techniques, be sure to proofread as slowly and carefully as you possibly can, and to look up any and all words you're not absolutely certain you are using correctly. This will go a very long way toward ensuring that you have, in fact, said what you meant to say, and not given someone the thumbs up on murder. . . or adultery, as in one famous Biblical misprint. (Click through the link for some excellent advice on avoiding similarly embarrassing typos.)

Also check for spelling.
via Mandatory.

Keep an eye out for missing words, too.
Assuming you still have eyes,.



















It's all in the delivery: punctuation and logical stops


Always consider the impact of punctuation on meaning as well as on style and flow. Punctuation was, in fact, initially invented as a means of indicating when orators (and, later, actors) should pause for breath. When actors ignore the supplied punctuation, it makes a mess of meaning. This is a common problem among students and new actors first encountering William Shakespeare's iambic pentameter verse: many people inherently feel that they should pause at the end of each line, regardless of punctation, or lack thereof.

via Motifake
My current play, a comedy called "The Complete Works of William Shakespeare (abridged)," contains a joke about that very issue. One of the actors, reading biographical notes on the author, pauses between pages at an amusingly awkward point, describing Shakespeare's mother as "Mary Arden, daughter of a Roman. (next card) Catholic member of the landed gentry."

Thankfully, this particular comma fail was a hoax.
via Museum of Hoaxes.




Punctuation is even more powerful in writing. A missing or misplaced comma can change the meaning of an entire sentence.

The best way to check your own work for appropriate punctuation is to read it aloud. Where you naturally pause, there should be appropriate punctuation (usually a comma or period) to indicate the pause. If you don't naturally pause while reading the sentence aloud, you don't need a comma.



Don't skip the rehearsal process


No theatrical production goes public without an extensive rehearsal process, which generally includes a good bit of revision and adjustment. The final rehearsal, when we have everything just about right, is a preview performance. The audience for this show is comprised of family and friends, who serve as a sounding board of sorts -- the actors' version of proofreaders. They can offer feedback on the performance, pointing out any serious problems we may have overlooked. I strongly recommend that writers seek out a preview audience for their work before submitting it as well. For MALS students, please do consider making use of your friendly neighborhood writing consultant. I also strongly encourage the formation of writing groups, which can be a great resource for peer review.

And if writing groups fail you, look into acting groups. What was that I said about "energizing"? 

I hope these reminders serve you well as you head into the home stretch of the semester. Did I commit the very sins of which I speak in this post? If so, do point them out to me, and mock at will. And if you need a break and a good, hearty laugh this weekend, come on out to the theatre!

Cheers,
Emily

May 2, 2012

Ninja Proofreading

Understandably, you're probably sick of your final paper(s) by now. But I urge you to resist the temptation to rush through the proofreading process.

Proofreading is tedious but essential to completing a great paper. After all, why would you want to let a a string of misspellings, incorrect words, and punctuation errors obscure a carefully constructed argument that you've worked on for months?

So, instead of glancing your paper over in an attempt to rid yourself of it once in for all, adopt a new attitude towards proofreading. Be methodical, unconventional, and stealthy. Proofread like a ninja! Here's a few tips to help you do that:

Ninja Proofreading Rule #1: Outsmart the enemy. Print your paper out to proofread it. Like it or not, we are conditioned to proofread according to squiggly red and green lines. You might swear that you're not - that you don't trust those menacing lines, and since Clippy bit the dust, you are free from the tethers of the word-processor's built-in know-it-all-ness. But trust me, you rely on them to some degree. Printing out a copy to proofread allows you to release your paper from the crutches of spellchecker, and allows you to highlight, circle, and mark out errors and rewrites in a much more satisfying, tactile manner.

Ninja Proofreading Rule #2: Don't let your paper see it coming. Read from the bottom up. I don't mean literally read backwards (I'm not trying to kill you here - you're already half-dead at this point in your writing). Start at the end of your paper and work your way up, reading (forward) one paragraph at a time. Doing so will allow you to focus on structure, spelling, and punctuation because you'll be breaking up your reading into small, disordered chunks. That's what you want right now.

Ninja Proofreading Rule #3: Do it with style. Read the paper aloud, standing up, in a confident tone.. It really doesn't matter if you have an audience for this one, because only the act of reading aloud, word for word, will help you recognize the sneakiest errors, for example, where you accidentally wrote "form" when you meant "from." Purposely using an authoritative, even smug tone will not only prevent you from lapsing into a harried murmur (causing you to say "yada yada yada" and miss errors), but it will in fact highlight your errors by making you sound like a bit of an idiot.

Ninja Proofreading Rule #4: Attack when your paper least expects it. Don't proofread immediately after you've finished writing. I can almost guarantee that you will miss half of the mistakes existing in your paper if you try and proofread after spending 5 hours trying to perfect your conclusion. You need to give your eyes and your brain a break. Ideally, you can let it rest a day. At the very least, take an hour to leave the room and do something completely unrelated to your paper before returning to proofread. (Working on another paper does NOT count as something completely unrelated to your paper.)

Ninja Proofreading Rule #5: Make it like you weren't even there. Schedule an hour or two exclusively for proofreading. Disappear mysteriously (preferably in a ninja-like manner), and during this time, shun the outside world and proofread only.

Ninja Proofreading Rule #6: Allow no distraction. Do not rely on proofreading "as you go." Also, don't revise the copy of your paper on your computer as you proofread your printed-out copy. I don't care if you think it's more efficient, because it's not, really. All you'll end up doing is not really proofreading and not really revising. No matter how diligently you try to be when you do either of these things, chances are you've left some obvious mistakes in your paper. You might even add in new mistakes while you swap between reading and correcting two copies of your work.

Ninja Proofreading Rule #7: Respect that which is simple in appearance. My last piece of advice for ninja proofreading is this: don't leave revising your bibliography until the last minute. I promise you it will take about 4 times longer to proofread, edit, and perfect the formatting, punctuation, and styling of a bibliography than you think it will.

I'll leave you with some links about the proofreading process that I think you might find helpful. First, here's a link to UNC-Chapel Hill's proofreading handout. This covers all the bases in a non-ninja fashion, but is helpful nonetheless. Second, remember that just because something's grammatically correct doesn't mean it's actually correct. This rather amusing blog highlights this fact. Additionally, here's a video titled, "The the Impotence of Proofreading." This poem, if written, would entirely check out if one were to rely on a word processing spellchecker, but, as you will hear, you would NOT want to commit any of these errors in your paper. Warning: this video contains profanity. And finally, because I've always wanted to include a cat in this blog, here's a ninja kitty (who might want to proofread): funny pictures
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Good luck finishing up the Spring 2012 semester, and have a great break!